Editorial Services

Note: While I’m remaining open to sensitivity reads, I am temporarily closing to manuscript and query edits in order to focus on my internship. Check back soon!


I offer freelance editing and sensitivity reading (no short stories, graphic novels, picture books, or nonfiction, please). I pride myself on my attention to detail and structure alike, as well as my accessibility, friendliness, and humor. My edits will push you to make your materials the best they can be without encroaching on your vision.

More detailed information about me is on my About page, but in summary: I’m an intern with a literary agent and a YA writer represented by Heather Flaherty at The Bent Agency. I’ve also interned with Stonesong and Entangled Publishing.

My services, pricing, and contact form are below. Please do get in touch if you have any questions. I can’t wait to work with you!

Categories/genres I work with:

-YA—all genres more than welcome, but I take a particular shine to contemporary, magical realism, science fiction, fantasy, and anything that straddles genre lines, has romance, and/or features diverse characters.

-MG—again, I accept all genres, but contemporary, mystery, science fiction, and fantasy are probably my favorites here.

-Adult—I accept new adult contemporary romance and general romance (though not erotica or erotic romance).

What I offer:

Query edit: $10 (one round; any additional rounds are $5)

What I’ll do: Edit everything from structure and format to diction and punctuation. Offer a thorough critique pointing out areas that need improvement and offering long strings of exclamation points when I love something. Make sure every word counts—and shines.

Partial manuscript edit: $0.0025/word (for example, $75 for 30,000 words)

What I’ll do: Everything I do for full manuscript edits, but in place of a more formal edit letter, I’ll provide you with a list of problem areas I noticed in your partial. Help you make the best first impression possible with readers, agents, and editors. (Please note that I will only edit partials up to 40,000 words. If you want edits on more of your project, choose a full manuscript edit.)

Full manuscript edit: $0.004/word (for example, $200 for 50,000 words)

What I’ll do: Review your full manuscript, leaving suggestions, questions, and hearts via Word’s track changes feature. Note every problem area I find and suggest how to fix them. In addition, I will write you an edit letter addressing the large-scale issues in your manuscript.

Sensitivity reading

If you’ve done your research and want to get an #ownvoices perspective on your manuscript, I’d be more than happy to help. Here’s what I can provide sensitivity reading feedback on: queerness (gay cisgender man), depression, anxiety, and psychosis (hallucinations).

Full manuscript sensitivity read for 60,000 to 100,000 words: $250

For manuscripts below 60k or above 100k, contact me through the form below to negotiate rates.


“Mark’s sensitivity read was exactly what I needed before diving into revisions. He not only provided careful feedback pinpointing specific areas that would benefit from adjustment and why, but his overall editorial suggestions were equally helpful in determining what I needed to address in my next round of revisions. I definitely recommend Mark for writers looking for professional feedback to help guide them while reworking their manuscripts, and would happily work with him again.”

—Ava Jae, author of the Beyond the Red trilogy (Sky Pony Press/Skyhorse Publishing)

“Working with Mark was one the best choices that I made during the process of writing Hold! I originally contacted him as a sensitivity reader, and his feedback on that front was exceptional, but he also provided thoughtful suggestions about characterization and voice that were invaluable during the revision process. Hire Mark. You won’t regret it!”

—Rachel Davidson Leigh, author of Hold (Duet Books/Interlude Press)


Please submit your initial information through the form below. I require at least half of the total payment at the time you book your editorial service in order to secure your place in my schedule. I can only refund initial payments, and this is only in cases where I haven’t started editing or reading yet.

For sensitivity reading, please indicate your manuscript’s word count and the area(s) on which you’d like to see feedback.


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